Thursday 10 November 2011

Max: entertaining style

I should really be marking but I'm taking a moment again to show off an extract of Max's work. (I'm thoroughly enjoying all your work Year 5.) Take a look at this...

On the stormy and windy day that you heard about at the beginning of the story, Ruben was standing in the dead abandoned field eating a banana when, out of nowhere, came two gargoyles flying out at him! "They look like marble so they must be statues!" Ruben exclaimed. What is going on? Ruben didn't have time to think about that. He just managed to duck in time.

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