Thursday, 10 November 2011

Caitlin M: delightful phrases

I'm currently enjoying marking Year 5's Dahl-style story writing and am just pausing to share a couple of snippets from Caitlin's work...

Now, Ruben was in a tough position.

After a short time of thinking...

As he entered the mysterious house, he didn't notice the statue by the tree was watching his every move.

And finally, my favourite:

Was this the end for little Ruben?

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